Here is a correction for your writing :)

המשפחה היהודית של סטן היא מצויינת

Eddie's family has only him and his mother.
Like Ben's family too.
Beverly's got a father, but hasen't got a mother.
Bill's family hasen't their younger son. He is dead.
Bill's family is unhappy.
And Richie's family is also unhappy. They are tired of Richie.

Stan's jewish family is perfect.

Personal note: These are terrible sentences regardless of their grammar as it is not a nice thing to be condescending to people who are not jewish, we jews need to be a light to the other nations, please my sister, be a light.

The correction of Din is perfect, and I just wanted to comment that you tend to add unnecessary apostrophes to the names (here and in previous posts): אד'י, דר'י etc.

When is it useful? in ריצ'י (because otherwise we would read it as Ritzi instead of Richie), or in 'ג'ורג (otherwise will will read it as gorg).
The apostrophes are useful when we deal with sounds that do not exist in the Hebrew alphabet, eg: Southampton = סאות'מפתון, Jack (in French where the J is softer) = ז'ק, and in some Arabic sounds.