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Writing part 1. Essay. Healthy food Although it is very popular to be healthy and to keep fit nowadays, as for young people, they don’t pay attention to their health and fitness. The first reason of modern lifestyle of the youth is a publicity and propaganda. Everywhere we can see burgers, ice-cream, coca-cola, which are drawn the best designers. Children don’t realize about these harmful products. On the other hand, the parents should be ready for explaining about healthy food and not allowed to eat a useless meal, like burgers or cola. Furthermore, almost nobody likes physical education lessons staying at school. As a result, little percent of children have a good health. It is necessary to improve education system about healthy life explaining the most important aspects of proper food and physical exercises. In contrast to people under the age 25, who realize all about fitness and thanks to social media, they try to stay in shape generally. In conclusion, I would agree with the statement because although we have a lot of opportunities to be healthy, there is nothing to change in lifestyle without looking up of physical education from the school time.

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Writing part 1. Essay. Healthy food

It is a trend to stay Although it is very popular to be healthy and to keep fit nowadays; however, this is not the case for the younger people. as for young people, they don’t pay attention to their health and fitness.The following reasons could be why:


Firstly, the modern lifestyle of the youth is all about publicity and propaganda. Everywhere we can advertisements of see burgers, ice-cream, coca-cola, designed by the best designers. Children don’t realize how harmful these products are. about these harmful products. Although, On the other hand, the parents should be ready for educating their children about healthy food and restrict them from having junk food like not allowed to eat a useless meal, like burgers or cola.


Secondly,  almost nobody likes many students dislike physical education lessons staying at school. As a result, these children face strong inertia to exercise.  little percent of children have a good health.

It is necessary to improve education system about in healthy living, explaining educating the most important aspects of proper eating food and physical exercises. 

However, in comparison, In contrast to people above under the age of 25 know about healthy living and the importance of realize all about fitness. Also, thanks to the influences of social media,  they try to stay in shape to look good. generally.

In conclusion, I feel that the exposure and education of healthy living and fitness is very important in determining the perception people have. Although there are many facilities and opportunities to stay healthy and keep fit, it ultimately lies in the person to be motivated and determined to stay healthy and fit.

In conclusion, I would agree with the statement because although we have a lot of opportunities to be healthy, there is nothing to change in lifestyle without looking up of physical education from the school time.

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