government spend a lot of money in art
As the economy is growing fast nowadays, people have surplus money to spend on spiritual enjoyment. Thereby, a growing numbers of investment on art were done by government. Since art industry is not requisite to the whole society seemingly, arguments about sufficient art investment become an eye-catching topic gradually, some people insist that public services and facilities are more worthy to be invested.
Good investment on art will lead individual aesthetics and even morality to higher level, which will make our society more harmonious. Besides, the art market will attract a lot of related experts and investors, and will be well stimulated to grow faster. In long term, art industry will be one important engine to economic development as this market has combined effect. As for the drawback of art investment, improper investment on art will result in considerable financial deficit and the 'engine' will convert to 'burden' finally.
I think that's why some people endorse that it is better to invest on other fields such as public service and facilities.Firstly, good facilities such as public parks and transportation systems will be very convenient to daily life. Secondly, public facilities such as infrastructure investment will improve employment rate and ensure satisfactory economic growth.
From my own perspectives, investment on art can be an additional option to investment on other fields which are essential to society develop. Anyway, public services and facilities is priority in society development, only sufficient money can be put into art field.
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government spending a lot of money in art
As the economy is growing fast nowadays, people have better standards of living and can afford luxuries such as the appreciation of Art. surplus money to spend on spiritual enjoyment. Therefore, a growing number of investments on art were made by the government. Since art industry is not requisite to the whole society seemingly, art is abstract and may not commonly be seen as a key contributor and driver of the economy, backlash on the investment in the art industry has been receiving a lot of attention. They argue that about sufficient art investment become an eye-catching topic gradually, some people insist that public services and facilities are more worthy of investments. to be invested.
However, I beg to differ. I feel that good investment in art will lead individual aesthetics and even morality to higher level, which will make our society more harmonious. Besides, The art market is also capable of attracting will attract a lot of related experts and investors, and will be well stimulate the economy to grow faster. In the long term, the art industry can be one important engine to the country's economic development as this market has combined effect.
As for the drawback on the art investments, it could have possibly stemmed from the worries of improper investments on art that will result in considerable financial deficit and the 'engine' will convert to 'burden' finally. Hence, the people think that endorse that it is better to invest on other fields such as public service and facilities. I do agree that Firstly, good facilities such as public parks and transportation systems will provide more convenience to the people. be very convenient to daily life. Secondly, Also, public facilities such as infrastructure investment will lead to improvement in employment rate and ensure satisfactory economic growth.
From my own perspectives, investment on art can be an additional option to investment on other fields which are essential to society develop. Anyway, public services and facilities is priority in society development, only sufficient money can be put into art field.
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The topic you've touched on is good but some of your sentences are hard to comprehend. The flow of your points are also slightly disrupted. I'd recommend for you to keep your sentences simpler and focus on coming out with the structure of your essay which in this case can be
1. introduction of the topic - the government's investment in the art industry
2. Reasons for supporting the investment in the art industry
3. Reasons for not supporting the investment in the art industry.
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