Could someone help to review this essay? If possible score it in the terms of ielts. Thanks. TV programs aimed children play an important role in letting them relax and explore the world. Children can learn more effectively through watching TV because the visual contents are more direct and interesting. Some people argued that children should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and school. Personally, I don't agree with this opinion for a couple of reasons. First, Watching television for a long time could be harmful to children's physical and psychological health. Once they indulged into watching TV, they don't want to go outside and play games with their peers which are very important for their physical and mental development. Second, The contents that provided to children can stifle their creativity. For instance, if we want to teach a group of children how a pig eats food, we need to draw a simple cartoon pig first. Next time, when we ask the children to draw a pig, they probably draw the same thing they saw before instead of something they imagine out. Last, Children don't have the ability to cope with complex or adult information. They can be easily misled by the inappropriate content of TV shows. In conclusion, children could be allowed to watch some video courses to help them broaden their horizons at school and watch some children aimed programs at home for the purpose of relaxing and as a supplemental to the things they learn from school. But they need to be supervised by adults to watch television for a certain period and the programs they watching need to be filtered and selected by adults as well. Despite, watching TV can help them learn more effectively to some extent, they should not be allowed to watch TV in a frequent manner.