Have you ever given a big hand to others?
When I was in university, I went to Cambodia to do volunteer work. I worked for Cambodian poor kids. I washed the children’s hair, changed their clothes to new ones and helped them to take anthelmintic. And we played many games together. Seeing the children amused by me made me feel happy. Since then, I have had fund-raising for them steadily.
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Have you ever given a big hand to others?
When I was in university, I went to Cambodia to do volunteer work. I worked for Cambodian poor poor Cambodian kids. I washed the children’s hair, changed their clothes to new ones /got them new clothes and helped them to take anthelmintic. And , and we played many games together. Seeing the children amused by me made me feel happy. Since then, I have had fund-raising for them steadily.First sentence: when using 2 adjectives and 1 refers to a country, that one comes last. See for example: traditional Japanese cuisine, big American cars, my new Indian coworker.
Second sentence: the phrase 'to change somebody's clothes' means you undress that person and then dress them in new clothes. If you were not dressing the children in their new clothes, but only gave them new clothes to replace their old ones, you may want to rephrase.
It's also not common to start a sentence with the word 'and' because this is a word we normally use to link 2 clauses (parts of 1 sentence) together.
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