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Introduce a movie Dear Lucy, I am writing to introduce one of my favorite movies, Forrest Gump, to you. The movie is so excellent that I can’t help my feelings of excitement. I am sure that you will be moved deeply by the great spirit of the actor, and at the same time this movie representing the distinctive American cultural is extremely attractive. Forrest Gump was disabled but never give his dream up, he had not a dreary commitment to mean ambitious or love of comfort, he also was not an anxious social climbers. His persistence is the key of hi success. All in all, this educational movie impressed me a lot. I hope you will like the movie. Looking forward to your reply! Yours sincerely.

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Introduce a movie

Dear Lucy,
I am writing to introduce one of my favorite movies, Forrest Gump, to you. The movie is so excellent that I can’t help my feelings of excitement. I am sure that you will be moved deeply by the great spirit of the actor, and at the same time this movie representing the distinctive American cultural is extremely attractive.
Forrest Gump was disabled but never give gave up his dream up, he had not a dreary commitment to was not mean or ambitious or he did not love comfort, he also was not an anxious social climbers. His persistence is the key of hi to his success. All in all, this educational movie impressed me a lot.
I hope you will like the movie. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely.

(A native speaker would probably say "I am writing to introduce one of my favorite movies, Forrest Gump. The movie is so good that I can't contain my excitement. I am sure you will enjoy the actor's great spirit and the representation of the distinctive American Culture. Forrest Gump was disabled, but he never gave up his dreams. He wasn't mean, ambitious, or materialistic and he did not care about social status. His persistence was the key to his success. All in all, this educational movie impressed me a lot.")

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