My life in Berlin I didn't like Berlin at all. I thought, Berlin is too mainstream because everybody want to go/live in Berlin. Berlin is really crowded and a little dirty. For almost 6 months i alwa

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My life in Berlin I didn't like Berlin at all. I thought, Berlin is too mainstream because everybody want to go/live in Berlin. Berlin is really crowded and a little dirty. For almost 6 months i always thought, why, why i'm here. I wanna live in another city, like Stuttgart or Frankfurt. But then I found a friend, a german friend and she showed me, how wonderful berlin is. She showed me Berlin with another perspektive and then i felt in Love with Berlin. I live here for almost 3 years and i really enjoy it. I have a big apartment with 3 rooms, Kitchen, Bathroom and Balcony. Sometimes i think, that i'm really lucky to have an opportunity like now.

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My life in Berlin

I didn't like Berlin at all. I thought, Berlin was too mainstream because everyone wants to go and live in Berlin. Berlin is really crowded and a little dirty. For almost 6 months, I always thought, why, why i'm here? I want to live in another city, like Stuttgart or Frankfurt. But then I found a friend, a German friend and she showed me how wonderful Berlin is. She showed me Berlin ~~with~~ from another perspective and then I fell in love with Berlin. I have lived here for almost 3 years and I really enjoy it. I have a big apartment with 3 rooms; a kitchen, bathroom and balcony. Sometimes I think that i'm really lucky to have this an opportunity ~~like~~ now.

**Good job. Make sure you capitalize the name of countries, don't capitalize the names of rooms. I changed "everybody" to "everyone" because it sounds better, more polished.

My life in Berlin

I didn't like Berlin at all. I thought, "Berlin is too mainstream because everybody wants to go/live in Berlin." Berlin is really crowded and a little dirty. For almost 6 months I always thought, "Why, why am I here? I want to live in another city, like Stuttgart or Frankfurt." But then I found a friend, a German friend, and she showed me how wonderful Berlin is. She showed me Berlin from another perspective, and then I fell in love with Berlin. I have lived here for almost 3 years, and I really enjoy it. I have a big apartment with 3 rooms, a kitchen, bathroom and balcony. Sometimes I think how I'm really lucky (Or: Sometimes I think how lucky I am) to have an opportunity like this.

That's lovely! I'm glad you are enjoying Berlin.

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