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flowwr park I went to the flower park last week. It was so nice season! Fortunaly,it was good day of weather. So many bees were collecting honey. I like taking photos,I tried it. I want go to there next season. What is the seasonal flower in your country now?

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こんいち　わ、 これ　わ　え　の　いい　です　よ。 Hallo, das ist ein schoenes Bild. Ich hoffe ich hab es richtig in japanisch geschrieben.
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flowwer park

I went to the flower park last week to view flowers in bloom.
It was so nice Such a beautiful season!
Fortunately,it was good day of the weather was great.
So many bees were collecting honey.
I like taking photos.  I tried it. 1
I want go to there again next season.

What is the seasonal flower in your country now?

1.  Is this the first time you tried taking photos of the bees collecting honey.  If so, you should write something like. "I just tried taking photos of bees collecting honey"  otherwise just leave the sentence out because it is not clear what you are trying to say and makes the reader in puzzlement.

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flower park

I went to the flower park last week.
It was so nice season!
Fortunaly,it was good day of weather.
So many bees were collecting honey.
I like taking photos,I tried it.
I want go to there next season.

What is the seasonal flower in your country now?

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