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(╥_╥)(╥_╥)元宵节(╥_╥)(╥_╥) 还怎么能补充这个分析呢??????老师让我们分析这首儿歌,但是我不知道该怎么分析 (╥_╥)(╥_╥)(╥_╥) 元宵节 窗外月儿圆又圆, 全家欢聚吃汤圆。 正月十五元宵节, 家家户户庆团圆。 一个关于元宵节的传说: 传说在很久以前,凶禽猛兽很多,四处伤害人和牲畜,人们就组织 起来去打它们, 有一只神鸟困为迷路而降落人间,却意外的被不知情的 猎人给射死了。天帝知道后十分震怒,立即传旨,下令让天兵于正月十 五日到人间放火,把人间的人畜财产通通烧死。 天帝的女儿心地善良, 不忍心看百姓无辜受难,就冒着生命的危险,偷偷驾着祥云来到人间, 把这个消息告诉了人们。众人听说了这个消息,有如头上响了一个焦雷。 吓得不知如何是好,过了好久,才有个老人家想出个法子,他说:「在 正月十四、十五、十六日这三天,每户人家都在家里张灯结彩、点响爆 竹、 燃放烟火。这样一来,天帝就会以为人们都被烧死了」。 凶 - 凶恶 禽 -鸟类 猛兽 - 凶猛的兽类 射死 - 用箭射死 震怒 - 异常愤怒;大怒 通通 - 副词,表示全部 不忍心 - 同情、 可怜 张灯结彩 - 挂着灯笼,结着彩球、彩带 这首儿歌阐明着农历正月十五全家在一起过的几天、这个节日的快乐的气氛,而且还写了这个节日的传统习俗。读起来很有节奏感、朗朗上口。 《元宵节》歌一共有四句,唯有1、2、4句押韵,押韵的句末字都是《圆》字。 (╥_╥)

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你已经分析得很好了,作为中国人的我都不知道怎么分析,我可能是个假中国人(╥_╥)

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妹子真漂亮,看到就想 yao yi kou.
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可以从内容和形式两方面去分析。可以做全面分析(这个小儿歌很简单,全面分析似乎没有必要),也可以抓住一点(或两三点)去分析,也可以作中西文化的比较。提供两个思路供参考:思路一 ---- 短短的一首儿歌,用了四个“圆”字,这正是这首歌的中心意思。思路二:“圆”、“团圆”、“圆满”是很多中国文艺作品的中心意象,但是西方文学似乎与此不同,而且“满月”还被认为是引致精神病患者病发的因素之一。可以由此进行文化的比较。
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(╥_╥)(╥_╥)元宵节(╥_╥)(╥_╥)

还怎么能补充这个分析呢??????老师让我们分析这首儿歌,但是我不知道该怎么分析 (╥_╥)(╥_╥)(╥_╥)



元宵节                        Lantern Festival
窗外月儿圆又圆,    The moon outside the window is round, so round
全家欢聚吃汤圆。    The entire family gather around to eat mochi
正月十五元宵节,    Lantern Festival of the 15th of the First Lunar Month
家家户户庆团圆。    Every family celebrating reunion


一个关于元宵节的传说:One Legend about the Lantern Festival
传说在很久以前,The lore said, that once upon long ago

凶禽猛兽很多, many are the ferocious beasts

四处伤害人和牲畜,people and lifestock everywhere were hurt by them

人们就组织 起来去打它们,The people got organized to get them

有一只神鸟困为迷路而降落人间,A divine/magical bird got stranded lost its way and descended upon the mortal world,

却意外的被不知情的 猎人给射死了。some hunters not knowing the situation, shot the bird with arrows and killed it.

天帝知道后十分震怒,The Emperor of Heavens became extremely angry when he found out about it.

立即传旨,immediately an edict was issued

下令让天兵于正月十 五日到人间放火,and commanded the heavenly troops that on the 15th of the lunar month to set the mortal world ablaze

把人间的人畜财产通通烧死。to let all living be burnt to death and property be destroyed

天帝的女儿心地善良,The daughter of the Emperor of Heavens was kindhearted

不忍心看百姓无辜受难,and could not bear to see the innocents suffer

就冒着生命的危险,and so risked her life

偷偷驾着祥云来到人间,and stole down to earth on an auspicious cloud

把这个消息告诉了人们。telling the people of the news

众人听说了这个消息,When the populace heard it,

有如头上响了一个焦雷。it was as if thunder had clapped on their heads.

吓得不知如何是好,and were frightened to their wits

过了好久,after a long while,

才有个老人家想出个法子,an elder thought of an idea

他说:he said

「在 正月十四、十五、十六日这三天,on the three days of the 14th, 15th and 16th,

每户人家都在家里张灯结彩、each and every house shall light up brightly lit lanterns,

点响爆 竹、燃放烟火 set off firecrackers and fireworks

这样一来,This way,

天帝就会以为人们都被烧死了」。the Emperor of the heavens will think that humanity was burnt to death.


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这是一首小诗歌。你错把分析的重点放在了“元宵节”的由来上,对诗里所描述的景色、气氛和作者要表达的喜庆祥和,国泰民安的中心思想,却简单带过。

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