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My favorite season My favorite season is spring. Because when spring comes, it gets warmer. My town have snow during winter. It is very cold, and hard to drive. I don't like being cold. And my work's the most busy season is winter. I'm glad to get spring, because my work become calm down. I travel to Thailand(Phuket) every spring with husband. We are looking forward to this every year's travel. We work hard for a year for this travel. While staying in Phuket, we are always daydreaming at the hotel. We plan to tavel to Thai next spring. In Japan, companies and schools begin from spring. New employees join our office. I feel fresh. For that reasons, I like spring the most.

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My favorite season

My favorite season is spring, because when spring comes, it gets warmer. My town have snows during winter. It is gets very cold, and hard to drive. Also, I don't like being cold. 
And Additionally, my work's the most busy season of my work is winter. I'm glad to get when spring arrives, because my work become calms down.
I travel to Thailand(Phuket) every spring with my husband. We are looking forward to this trip every year's travel. We work hard for a year for this travel trip. While staying in Phuket, we are always daydreaming at the hotel. We plan to travel to Thailand next spring.
In Japan, companies and schools begin from spring. New employees join our office. I feel fresh.
For that those reasons, I like spring the most.

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"Also/additionally/furthermore" helps to give another explanation, and sound more fluent. They all have the same meaning and you can use any word to state more reasons. e.g. I like to exercise because it keeps me healthy and strong. Also, it is fun because I can exercise by myself or with my friends.

" XX's" is usually used for living beings and organisations e.g. Mary's breakfast. Melvin's basketball. Sony's employees. Apple's shop.

I'm glad to get a job/ to get a promotion. Spring is a season so you can only say "When spring arrives/comes 春が来る時" and "During spring 春中" 

Travel is a verb. I am travelling to Japan. I travelled to Japan. I will travel to Japan. Are you travelling now/next week? Did you travel last week?

Trip is a noun. My trip to Japan was fun. Are you going on a trip now/next week? Did you go on a trip last week?

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My favorite season

My favorite season is spring, because when spring comes, it gets warmer. My town has snow during the winter. It is very cold and hard to drive. I don't like being cold.
And m My work's the most busy season is winter, so  I'm glad to get spring, because my work become calms down.
I travel to Thailand (Phuket) every spring with my husband. We are looking  look forward to this every year 's travel. We work hard for a year for this travel. While staying in Phuket, we are always daydreaming at the hotel. We plan to tavel to Thailand next spring.
In Japan, companies and schools begin from in the spring. New employees join our office, and I feel fresh.
For that reasons, I like spring the most.

This is great! It's a good perspective. I live in Thailand, and I miss the autumn and winter! I wish I could see snow again!

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