我的厨房里
厨房是在房子我的最喜欢的地方。因为我很喜欢做饭, 也真喜欢吃饭。我不太喜欢吃肉。我觉得蔬菜比肉更好吃。我早上平常吃菜和鸡蛋。中午吃鱼和米饭。晚上比较喜欢喝不加糖的茶。我不喜欢喝甜茶或者甜咖啡。
我的厨房里有一个白色的冰箱。冰箱里总是可以找到很多新鲜的水果。比如苹果, 香蕉, 葡萄等等。夏天我常常把西瓜吃了。它真好吃! 厨房里还有一张桌子, 也有三套椅子。盘子和杯子在桌子上。有时候杯子被我的狗坏了。这是因为我忘了把厨房的门关好。
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我的厨房里
厨房是在房子裡我的最喜欢的地方。因为我很喜欢做饭，也真很喜欢吃饭，但我不太喜欢吃肉，我觉得蔬菜比肉更好吃。我早上平常通常吃菜和鸡蛋當作早餐，中午則吃鱼和米饭。晚上我比较喜欢喝不加糖的茶（or you can just say: 無糖的茶，it's more concise），我不喜欢喝甜茶或者甜咖啡有加糖的茶或咖啡。我的厨房里有一个白色的冰箱。冰箱里总是可以找到很多新鲜的水果。比如苹果、香蕉、葡萄等等。夏天我常常把吃西瓜吃了，它真好吃！ 厨房里还有一张桌子也有和三套張椅子，盘子和杯子在桌子上。有时候杯子會被我的狗摔坏了，这是因为我總是忘了把厨房的门关好。
The red marked parts should be deleted, and the green marked parts are added by me.
Please always pay attention to the use of comma, period of full stop, colon and so on in Chinese, since they are much different than that in other language.
I already marked them in blue. We only use "period of full stop" when we already describe something completely or want to talk about something other. For instance, you use period of full stop between these two sentence: 我不太喜欢吃肉。我觉得蔬菜比肉更好吃。 However these 2 sentence are actually talking about same thing: your preference of food. So a comma here will be more suitable.
Your common of Chinese is pretty good actually!
Feel free to let me know if you have further question!
Enjoy your learning in Chinese ^^
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