I spend summer vacation now!
good evening! this is my first posted. i'm a college student in Japan! i started this ture for my goal. i want to speak more fluently and to talk with many people in English and to know more different culture, life style ,and so on.[emoji][emoji]
today i watched the video on youtube that the titles is " japanese candy tring". it is that foreign children tring japanese snacks and candys and judge it good or not . i didn't understand all content,but a part of it i could understand. the video was very fun.[emoji][emoji]
writing this sentence, i realize i don't know words i want to say in English. so i serch on google sometimes.[emoji][emoji]but to study another language is very interesting.
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I am go on a summer vacation now!
good evening! this is my first note. i'm a college student in Japan! i begin to us this website to reach my goal. i want to speak more fluently and to talk with many people in English and to know more different cultures, life styles,(should add another factor here, if not, I think "different cultures and life styles" should be better)and so on(should be deleted if you only have two factors).[emoji][emoji]today i watched a video on youtube which title is " japanese candy tring". it is some foreign children try some Japanese snacks and candies and judge it. i didn't understand all the content, but i could understand a part of it. the video is very funny.[emoji][emoji]
when I am writing this sentence, i realize that i don't know all the words i want to say in English. so i search them on google sometimes.[emoji][emoji]Nevertheless to study another language is very interesting.
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I spend summer vacation now!
Good evening! This is my first postcard. I'm a college student in Japan. I started (this ture for my goal?). I want to speak more fluently and to talk with many people in English and to know different cultures, life styles ,and so on.[emoji][emoji]. Today I watched a video on youtube called "Japanese candy tring". It shows foreign children (tring?) Japanese snacks and candys and judge them good or bad . I didn't understand all the content, only a part. The video was very funny.[emoji][emoji]Writing this sentence, I realize that I don't know the words I want to say in English so I sometimes google them. [emoji][emoji] To study another language is very interesting.
Very well written!
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Thank you for comments!
Oh I'm trying to these!as soon as possible!!!!
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Just correct some mistakes I could found, since I am a English learner, too. Recommend you a website called Grammarly, you could type your note on that website and it could help you with the most obvious grammar mistakes in your article
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Try a Youtube channel called Rachel and Jun! They are a Japanese-American marriage that upload a lot of content about japan, there are a number of videos that have Japanese subtitles so you can understand and they are very funny.
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