After my vocation.
Hey!
I was at a vacation. I was spending my free time with my family. I had a much sleep.) We visited our relatives in Liski.
I have some problems after my vocation.
Firstly, I have a lot of urgent tasks on my work. For instance, I should colculate the month salary for our call center month and continue negotiation with big partners.
Secondly, I don’t have enough motivation to do these tasks.
Thirdly, I need more sleep time.)
So, I hope , I can get my positive attitude to tasks back very fast!)
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After my vocation.
Hey!I was at a on vacation. I was spending my free time with my family. I had a slept much sleep. We visited our relatives in Liski.
I have run into some problems after my vocation.
Firstly, I have a lot of many urgent tasks on my from work. For instance, I should need to calculate the monthly salary for our call center month and continue negotiating with big partners.
Secondly, I don’t have enough motivation to do these tasks.
Thirdly, I need more sleep time.
So, I hope I can get my positive attitude to tasks back very fast quickly!
Not bad at all, Nikolai! Mechanically, you made very few mistakes. Most of my corrections are to make your writing sound more natural. I hope they help =)
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After my vocation.
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Hey!I was on vacation. I spent my free time with my family. I had a ton of sleep.) We visited our relatives in Liski.
I had some problems after my vacation.
Firstly, I had a lot of urgent tasks to work on. For instance, I had to calculate the monthly salary for our call center and continue negotiation with big partners.
Secondly, I didn't have enough motivation to do these tasks.
Thirdly, I needed to get more sleep.)
So, I hope , I can get my positive attitude back very fast so I can finish my tasks!)
*Past tense, needs a bit of work. But other than that it was pretty great!
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