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I wonder if you can improve this article for me. practice for the test.Please mark my grade（0-10points），Thkans. Dear John, I will be go to your city and major in master's program in arts at Y Unversity.writting this letter to teel you about me living habits. First,I need more time of my studies,I want to get as good sleep as I possible can;hence I wish you I had an early rest. In addition,I like clean room ,the habit of cleaning to help us from right life-style and is favorable to our healthy body. Finally,hope you tell me about your city,for instance fine food and custom and culture etc. I look forword to your reply,hope keep good communication with you. your sincerely, li Ming

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Practice for the test. Please mark my grade (0-10 points), thanks.

Dear John, 

I will be going to your city to major in the arts master's program at Y University. I'm writing this letter to address my living habits. 

Firstly, I need more time for my studies. If possible, I would like to get a good sleep, so I wish for an early rest. In addition to this, I enjoy cleaning my room. This activity helps to form a lifestyle that is essential and favorable for our bodies and mind. Finally, i hope that you could tell me more about your city. For instance, where to find fine food, insight into the customs and culture etc.

I look forward to your reply. Keep in touch ( I hope to stay in good communication with you).

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

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I wonder if you can improve this article for me.

Practice for the test. Please mark my grade（0-10points），thanks.

Dear John,
I will be going to your city and majoring in the master's program in arts at Y University. I am writing this letter to tell you about my living habits. First, I need more time of my studies. I want my sleep to be get as good sleep as possible can; hence, I wish you I had to have an early rest. In addition, I like a clean room. The habit of cleaning to help us form the right life-style and is favorable to our a healthy body. Finally, I hope you can tell me about your city--such as fine food, and customs, and culture etc.  I look forward to your reply and hope to keep stay in good communications with you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Notes:  

1. Practice basic grammar rules in writing, especially about capitalization, spelling, and spacing.

2. Try not to make sentences too long and only concentrate on the subject and the action.  

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