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It's a lazy day. I was lazy today. Although I have a task that should do it, I didn't do it. I listened to music, read books and clean my room. Because I needed necessity of my hear and balance of spirit. I need to learn culture and history all over the world to know this world and my spirit growth. I need more time. But I'll do it for a long time because my life will be long.

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It's a lazy day.

I was lazy today.
Although I had a task that I should have done it, I didn't do it.
I listened to music, read books and cleaned my room.
Because I needed the necessity of my heart and the balance of spirit.
I need to learn culture and history all over the world to know this world so my spirit will grow.
I need more time.
But I'll do it for a long time because my life will be long.
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It's a lazy day.

I was lazy today.
Although I had a task to do, I didn't do it.
I listened to music, read books and cleaned my room.
Because it was necessary to the balance of my heart and my spirit

I need to learn the culture and history of the whole world to understand it and grow my spirit

I need more time.
But I'll do it for a long time because my life will be long.


Well done! I'm not brave enough to write a long passage in Japanese. There's so many differences in structure between the two languages, but you did very well :) 

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It was  a lazy day (for me today) . > I had a lazy day today.

I was lazy today.
Although I had a task that I should have done today  it, I didn't do it.
Instead, I listened to music, read books and cleaned my room.
Because I needed necessity of my hear and balance of spirit? > ( It was ) because I wanted to find some peace of mind.
I need to learn culture and history all over the world to know this world and my spirit growth. > I want to learn more about the cultures and history of the countries all over the world.
I need more time. > I just have give it some time.
But I'll do it for a long time because my life will be long.> But I will be able to do that for a long time because time is on my side. You see, I am still young.

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