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My favorite film My favorite film is Kill Bill.It's my favorite film because I really love thrillers.Film about woman who want to kill Mafia that abducted her daughter.I interested in this film because I like with exciting plot and many fights,but Kevin Tarantino carried away with blood in fight part in Japanese abbey it was too much!And in the and I'd like to write what I like and don't like. First is a plot.In my opinion the plot is the most important and need much time to write them.Second is actors.The best actors was Uma Turman and David Kedderan I really like them.And it was one think that Kevin Tarantino carried away with violence it was too much blood and scenes of it.

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My favorite film

My favorite film is Kill Bill. It's my favorite film because I really love thrillers. The film is about a woman who wants to kill the Mafia that abducted her daughter*1. I am interested in this film because I like with the exciting plot and it's many fights, but Kevin Quentin Tarantino got carried away with blood in some fights part, like the in Japanese abbey*2.  It was too much! And in the and I'd also like to write about what I liked and don't didn't like. First is a plot. In my opinion the plot is the most important part*3 and needs much time to write them. Second is actors. The best actors performers was were Uma Turman and David Kedderan*4; I really liked them. And it was one think that I thought Kevin Quentin Tarantino got carried away with too much violence it was too much and blood and in some scenes of it.

*1 You needed to add the "is" because the subject of the sentence (film) lacked a verb to make it a complete sentence.  

*2 I'm not sure what word you're trying to use here (abbey).

*3 "Important" can only be used as an adjective, which is why I added to word "part" to it.

*4 I suggested you change the word actors to performers because you mentioned a female actress and a male actor, and it is simpler to use a word that is gender-neutral (no difference between male and female) in this case.  The semicolon (;) is needed after because you had a related but separate sentence after. 

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