Idyllic life. Today is the first day of September. It’s raining! Probably this is the first raindrops of season autumn. It seems that peoples are preparing for a long holiday as: Some people visit the

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Võ Thảo

Idyllic life. Today is the first day of September. It’s raining! Probably this is the first raindrops of season autumn. It seems that peoples are preparing for a long holiday as: Some people visit their hometowns, some people like traveling, some people just prefer to stay at home sleeping etc. My friendlies will prepare for their upcoming wedding. And I sit here feeling the ordinary life of this city. I like rains at the end of the day. It cleans the dirt on the road and it seems to melt everyone’s weariness. I rent the home near a large hospital, sometimes, the sound of an ambulance is still ringing up on the road. And the church bells remind people who go to church at the weekend ”. Sunsets are gradually covering on all roads to finish a day. I feel the scent of dinner from neighbor flying to. Just that's all. Everything is just very simply and it was called the idyllic life. PLEASE HELP ME TO CORRECT IT

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Idyllic life.

Today is the first day of September. It’s raining! Probably this is these are the first raindrops of season autumn. It seems that peoples are preparing for a long holiday as: Ssome people visit their hometowns, some people like traveling, some people just prefer to stay at home sleeping, etc. My friendlies will prepare for their upcoming wedding. And I sit here feeling the ordinary life of this city.
I like rains at the end of the day. It cleans the dirt on the road, and it seems to melt everyone’s weariness.
I rent the a home near a large hospital, and sometimes, the sound of an ambulance is still ringing up on the road. And the church bells remind people who go to church at on the weekends ”. Sunsets are gradually covering on all roads to finish a day (I'm not sure I understand this sentence: "The sunset covers the road to finish the day"?). I feel the scent of dinner from a neighbor flying to floating up. Just tThat's all.
Everything is just very simpely and it was is called the idyllic life.

PLEASE HELP ME TO CORRECT IT

Võ Thảo, Great job! This is a really wonderful, poetic sentence. First, here's the key:

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The only problems basically stem from part of speech issues (e.g., friendly, an adjective, incorrectly used as a noun, and simply, an adjective, also used as a noun), plural or singular issues, or too much specificity or too little. These are problems that are mostly tricky for advanced learners, so you're really doing great!

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