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Recommendation Letter Hello Folks, A friend will talk with the Vice President of his company to recommend me to a position. I will send my resume attached in an e-mail and I will write the text below in the e-mail's body. Can anyone check? Thanks. Hello XXXX, As I have mentioned to you, I saw the position for XXXX at XXXX and I was very interested to participate in the selection process. There is a short introduction below to be forward to the VP's analysis. I have over 20 years of experience in Information Technology, working in management positions and executive leadership. Over the last 14 years I’ve been working in strategic positions, including partnership management, on the partner side, which resulted in a good knowledge about partnerships that generate sales results. I have Post-Graduation degree in Information Technology Governance and I also have a Bachelor’s degree in Computer Information Systems. In addition, I have extensive technical experience and some professional certifications focused in service management and technologies, similar to the ones used by your Company. Nowadays I’m living in Brasília, however my plans are to move back to São Paulo, my home town, soon. I’m excited with this opportunity, and I hope to be invited for an interview. Thank’s XXXX. I owe you one, friend. All best,

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Recommendation Letter

Hello Folks,

A friend will talk with the Vice President of his company to recommend me for a position. I will send my resume attached in an e-mail and I will write the text below in the e-mail's body. Can anyone check? Thanks.

Hello XXXX,

As I have mentioned to you, I saw the position for XXXX at XXXX and I am very interested to be included as an eligible applicant.[1] Here is a short introduction below to be forwarded to the VP's analysis:

_________________   [These lines help your friend to cut and paste your introduction for forwarding]

[You need to address the proper person or group here, or just say "To Whom it May Concern:"]

I have over 20 years of experience in Information Technology, working in management positions and executive leadership. Over the last 14 years I’ve been working in strategic positions, including partnership management, on the partner side, which resulted in a good knowledge about partnerships that generate good[2] sales results.

I have a post-graduate degree in Information Technology Governance and I also have a bachelor’s degree in Computer Information Systems. In addition, I have extensive technical experience and some professional certifications focused in service management and technologies, similar to the ones used by your company.

Nowadays, I’m living in Brasília, however my plans are to move back to São Paulo, my home town, soon.

I’m excited with this opportunity, and I hope to be invited for an interview.

Kindest Regards,

<YOUR NAME HERE>

_________________

Thank’s XXXX. I owe you one, friend.

All the best,

[1. The phrase "participate in the selection process" means you want to be a part of the group that is choosing who will be hired, NOT be an applicant for the job. Search the web for this phrase to see what I mean.

2. Sales results can vary from no sales at all to fantastic, so you want to say what type of results you have been associated with.]

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