My first experience in Itaki
Hello everyone, this is my first text in Itaki, i want learn of your experience in english. I from Lima, Perú. I'm forty-six years old. I'm married and have two sons. My son is eighteen years old and my daugther is fifteen years old. I await your kind comments
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 8
0
My first experience in Itaki
Hello everyone, this is my first text entry in Itaki, I want learn about your experiences in using/learning English. I from Lima, Perú. I'm forty-six years old. I'm married and have two sons. My son is eighteen years old and my daughter is fifteen years old. I await your kind comments.============================
Hi! Great job here considering it's your first time! You were able to express yourself well and even wrote the numerical expressions correctly!
0
My first experience in Itaki
Hello everyone, this is my first text in Itaki. I want learn of about your experience in English. I am from Lima, Perú. I'm forty-six years old. I'm married and have two sons children. My son is eighteen years old and my daugther daughter is fifteen years old. I await your kind commentsThat's a very good first attempt. A few notes:
1/ Remember that "I" is always capitalised in English.
2/ You normally say "I want to learn about (something)" The expression "learn of" is not wrong but it is more limited in its use, and it would take too long to explain the distinction here.
3/ You need a form of the verb "to be" when describing where you are from. "I am from", he is from, they are from, etc.
4/ I'm not sure about Spanish but in Italian if you have children of different sexes you use the masculine plural (figli) for children. However you can't do that in English. If they are all sons you can use "sons", if they are all daughters you can use "daughters" but if they are a mixture then you must use "children".
0
Thank you very much Kinson.
0
Hi, I am newly married man. I am same with you that learning English at adult age. it is very hard. my experience is to surf internet watching movies with subtitles. consult an online dictionary(engish to chinese). but I can't remember new expression without repeated spacious review. but I improved during 10 years register here. I am not like the systematic learning student. if you have questions and curiosity in adult ESL learning please let me know. I am happy to tell you.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
