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Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to be considered for participation in the winter school ABC in City. Taking part in this event would be a solid step for advancing my personal development and scaffolding for the future academic success. As I’m planning to switch my career path from economics to specializing in migration and public policy, participation in this winter school would enormously upgrade my curriculum vitae as well as provide me with a room for discussion of the topics currently not popular in my country’s academic and public discourse.
As mentioned previously I graduated university with a Bachelor’s degree in Economics in 2015 and since then gathered diverse work experience in many international organizations.
During my internship at the Important Organization in 2016, I volunteered as an assisting teacher for refugees helping them strengthen their German conversational skills.
Of particular interest for me is the way migration alters host countries, in particular, the political changes it brings about. Analyzing the way the native ethnic groups and new-comers compete and struggle for power in a democratic system, especially in cases where assimilation is hindered by those groups’ distinct racial and cultural differences, appears to gain ever more importance...
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Letter of Motivation
It is with the utmost pleasure that I apply to ABC School in City. With my strong, motivation, enthusiasm, and
educational and professional qualifications, I am hoping my application will be taken into consideration.
As mentioned previously in my curriculum vitae, I graduated from the University of So and So with a Bachelor of Arts in Economics in 2015, and ever since I have accumulated diverse work experience in a number of international organizations.
Taking part in this event would contribute tremendously to both
my personal development and my future academic success. Since I am planning to change
my career path from economics to specializing in migration and public policy, participating
in this winter school would enormously upgrade my curriculum vitae as well as
grant me the opportunity to engage in healthy discussions about topics that are currently
not popular in my country’s academic and public discourse.
It is also worth mentioning that during my internship at the
Important Organization in 2016, I volunteered as an assisting teacher for
refugees, helping them strengthen their German conversational skills.
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Of particular interest to me, I should add, is the way migration alters host countries, in particular, the political changes it brings about. Analyzing the way the native ethnic groups and new-comers compete and struggle for power in a democratic system, especially in cases where assimilation is hindered by those groups’ distinct racial and cultural differences, appears to gain ever more importance.
Should you accept me in this program, you would surely grant me the opportunity to bring about significant progress and development in both my personal and perfessional life.
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