My day Today i wake up at 12 p.m. I had breakfast. I made salad with tomatoes and cucumbers. Also i made a sandwich with sour cream. I ate somewhere four a pieces. Then i drank tea with milk. Then i

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My day Today i wake up at 12 p.m. I had breakfast. I made salad with tomatoes and cucumbers. Also i made a sandwich with sour cream. I ate somewhere four a pieces. Then i drank tea with milk. Then i sit on the internet. Then i looked one series "Polyglot". I decided to write a diary. I decided me need to do it morning before studying. I decided to do it by the method Brian Tracy. I decided to write a plans for the day. Also i can to write what i did for the day. But at the beginning let will be fixed the first habit. Better with the morning "to eat the most nasty frog"(by method Brian Tracy).

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My day

Today i wake woke up at 12 p.m. I had breakfast. I made salad with tomatoes and cucumbers. Also i I made a sandwich with sour cream. I ate somewhere four a pieces. Then i I drank tea with milk.
Then i sit sat on the internet. Then i I looked at one series of "Polyglot".
I decided to write a diary. I decided me I need to do it in the morning before studying. I decided to do it by the method Brian Tracy. Brian Tracy`s method OR by the method of Brian Tracy
I decided to write a plans for the day. Also i I can to write what i did for the day. But at the beginning let will be fixed the first habit. Better with the morning "to eat the most nasty frog"(by method Brian Tracy). I`m not sure quite what you would like to say here. If you explain it to be a little more I will help you

Woke up because you are talking about the past.

Cucumber we do not put an 's' on the end as we are refer to the vegetable as a whole and not the individual slices.

I When we talk about ourselves, even in the middle of a sentence, we use a capital 'i'

sat because you are talking about the past

Brian Tracy`s method If it is a persons method then we put the person`s name with an 's first.

My day

Today i (1) wake (2) up at 12 p.m. I had breakfast. I made salad with tomatoes and cucumbers (3). Also i made a sandwich with sour cream. I ate somewhere(4) four a pieces. Then i drank tea with milk.
Then i sit(5) on the internet. Then i looked (6) one series "Polyglot".
I decided to write a diary. I decided me (7) need to do it morning (8) before studying. I decided to do it by the method Brian Tracy.
I decided to write a plans(9) for the day. Also i can to write what i did for(10) the day. But at the beginning let will be fixed the first habit. Better with the morning "to eat the most nasty frog"(by method Brian Tracy).

1- The pronoun I should always be written with Capital letters.

2- verb should be in the past- woke

3- spelling

4- I ate about four pieces. Somewhere- indefinite pronoun used to talk about places

5- verb should be in the past- sat. But the sentence doesn't make sentence. Suggestion: Then I surfed on the internet/Web

6- for movies, TV shows, use the verb "watch"

7- I need

8- in the morning

9- don't use a/an before nouns in the plural

10-during

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