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Hi everyone, my name is Sam, I live in Shenzhen China witch is a vibrant city with many companies of electronic, technology and internet.I like play guitar, photography and cycling.I'm learning English and coding,my goal on italki is can talk with nature speaker smoothly.I very glad to be your language partner if you are learning mandarin and cantonese,please don't hesitate s to sent me message.
Above is I'm going to field in my italki profile,but I feel it is verbose not simple,I don't know how to revise this and what should I do,would you like to give me some suggestions?
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My italki profile
Hi everyone, my name is Sam, and I live in Shenzhen China witch which is a vibrant city with many companies of electronic, technology and internet companies.I like playing guitar, photography and cycling. I'm learning English and coding, and my goal on italki is can to be able to talk with nature native speakers smoothly. I'd be very glad to be your language partner if you are learning Mandarin and Cantonese. Please don't hesitate s to send me a message.Above is I'm going to field in my italki profile,but I feel it is verbose not simple,I don't know how to revise this and what should I do,would you like to give me some suggestions?
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