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My name is Francisco and I’m from the north of Spain. I’m 23 years old, live in Madrid and work as a private teacher of secondary education since one year. I certainly can say that I’m a responsible, patient and kind person. I really like hiking with some of my friends, animating and listening to music. One year ago I completed my degree as engineer. During and after my formal education I took part in several volunteer projects with young people in different places of Madrid.
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My name is Francisco and I’m from the north of northern Spain. I’m 23 years old, live in Madrid and have worked as a private teacher of secondary education since for one year. I certainly can say that I’m a responsible, patient and kind person. I really like hiking with some of my friends, animating and listening to music. One year ago I completed my engineering degree as engineer. During and after my formal education I took part in several volunteer projects with young people in different places of Madrid.1
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My name is Francisco and I’m from the north of Spain. I’m 23 years old, live in Madrid and have worked [or: have been working] as a private teacher of secondary education* "some of my" can be eliminated and no meaning will be lost.
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