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Attempt is a part of important character in our life. No pain,no gain.Without attempt, we have doesn't make an achievement for anything.Many people just start to achieve their willing while get into troule.they abondon right away their dream and willing.for a while you feel relaxed in give up ,but it is deadly that you easy to lose hope from life. we not easy to give up , only you overcome trouble step by step , so we can make an achievement.
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Attempt is a part of important character in our life. No pain,no gain. Without attempt, we can't(I don't know how to revise it) make an achievement for anything. Many people just start to achieve their willing while getting into trouble.they abondon right away their dream and willing.for a while you feel relaxed in giving up ,but it is deadly that you are easy to lose hope from life. we can not be easy to give up , only you overcome trouble step by step , so we can make an achievement(I don't know how to revise the sentence, but it reads strangely).0
你是要说人要有目标吧，用goal或者ambition，attempt一般是想去做不好的事，中文的翻译一般作“企图”。have后面接dosen't也是错的，willing是形容词，指愿意作某事，be willing to do sth.， in 是介词，介词后面跟名词，所以give up是动词词组不对，后面如果是动词，就加ing变动名词， 主语后面一般也不会直接跟形容词，因此you easy 有问题。你的语法知识有些欠缺，去看些简单的语法书先吧，有比较薄的精简的类型的语法书，也不枯燥，推荐“我的第一本语法书”。
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