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Keep the curiosity Could you please correct my article ? Thank you! The word, "curiosity" had been in my find for several days. It had a profound effect on me. How long since you haven't smelled the flowers, tasted the good the food, sung a song? Why somebody can look but doesn't see, can listen but doesn't hear? Why somebody say life is so boring? In my oppion, they aren't be curious for the daily life for a long time and become jaded. Everything is taken for granted with no hesitation.They don't treat the life like a baby does. Probably there are a lot of umpteen things needed to be done. For example, how to earn a living; maintaining family ties; keeping friendships with the collegues; how to be healthy and so on. There seems so many things to do and what even a mess we are in and we have not much time and energy to take good care for ourselves. Slow down your steps now! Listen to your feelings, to your heart , to your soul. To live with curioustity like a toddler baby. When you are curious, you can find the beauty and love to be found; the strength to go forward in life. To sing as as nobody hear; To dance as nobody see; to love as though pain had never been experienced . In the end, when the time comes , you can say, "I have lived my life well lived".

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放慢生活的脚步吧,So let's us slow down our pace, 去更多的关照你的感受,experience things that care for you,  关照你的心灵,to care for  your soul 关照你的精神,and to nurse your spirit.  像象一个婴儿那样充满好奇地生活。Be like that new toddler filled with curiosity for life. 这样你会发现生活中的美、This way, you will discover the beauty in life, 善和爱,the kind and the love 会获得力量继续前行。to energize our life's onward journey.  去唱歌吧,Go and sing!  就像象无人去听;as if there's no one listening. 去跳舞吧,Go and dance, 就像象无人欣赏;as if there is no one to appreciate; 去爱吧,Go ahead and love, 就像象你从不曾受过伤害。as if you had never hurt before. 随着时间的流逝,With the passing of time, 你可以骄傲地说“我曾经活过, you can proudly say, "I had lived!"

There are many kinds of translations, a literal one, one keeping as close to the source language as possible.  These types are mainly for those language students.  Another kind is just reading enjoyment for the target audience, which are closer to meaning than language constructs.  I did not choose this one since you are trying to learn English.

If you have any question, please ask.  This way you learn :)

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保持好奇心 Keeping One's Curiosity 


“好奇心”这个词最近一直盘旋在我的脑海里。This word, "Curiousity" has been churning/twirling in my mind recently.  这个词深深地震动了我。 It had moved me. 我们已经有多久没有好好地闻闻花香,Long have I smelt the flowers, 品尝出食物的滋味,to sample the good taste of foods, 开心的唱一支歌?or to belch out a song heartily. 为什么有些人视而不见,Why is it that there are some who just look but not seen; 听而不闻?to hear but not to listen. 为什么有些人会说生活是如此无聊?Why are those who say life is this boring? 就我的观点来看,In my view/opinion, 是因为他们对日常生活失去了好奇心。It is because in their daily lives, they had lost their curiosity. 他们总把任何事情都当成想当然,They just every matter as something taken for granted.  他们没有像一个婴儿那样充满好奇地看待这个世界。No longer do they look at the world in wonder like those of a toddler.  诚然,Indeed, 在生活中我们有很多事情需要去做,there are many things in our lives needed to be done, 例如如何去挣钱,for example, how to earn a livelihood, 如何去维护和亲人, how to protect family 和同事的良好关系,and cultivating relationships with colleagues, 如何去保持健康等等。How to keep oneself healthy. 许许多多的事情甚至是一团糟的事情使我们几乎精疲力尽,Many a time, there are matters and even those messy stuff will cause us fatigue. 没有时间和精力去关注我们自己。We simply, don't have the time or energy for ourselves. 

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Dance to an audience of none and as nobody see,to love as though pain had  you have never been experienced hurt.__In the end, when your With the time comes  goes by,you should you can say, "I have lived My life well lived."


最好有份中文版, 有些修改是我猜猜的

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Probably There are a lot of umpteen things needed to be done.  -- For example,how to earning more money a living; ,how to keep a good realitionship with the maintaining family ties; keeping friendships and the collegues,how to keep fit be healthy and so on. __There seems So many things to do and what even a mess we are in and we have little not much time and energy to take good care of for ourselves.__Slow down your steps now!__Pay more attention Listen to your feelings,to your heart ,to your and soul. To live with Be curioustity like a toddler baby.__Then When you are curious, can find the beauty , and love to be found; and strength to go forward in life. To  You sing when no one is around anymore; as nobody hear,to 

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Keep the curiosity Be Curious

Could you please like to correct my artical Article? Thank you!

The word, "curiosity" has came to my mind for several days ago._ (如果你的意思是 "好奇" 這字已經在我腦袋有幾天了", 应該這样写, The word, "curiosity" had been in my find for several days, 你的原写是 "... 幾天前来進我的腦袋中") It touches me deeply had a profound effect on me.


How long since haven't you have smelled the flowers? Tasted good the food, or sung a song?_ 定要有一个空住Why somebody can People look but cann't don't see; can lisen but cann't hear but cannot listen?_Why o' why dothey say life is so boring?__兩个空位 In my opinion oppion,they had lost the curiosity of  for the daily life and become jaded.They always take Everything  is taken for granted without any no hesitation.They don't treat the life as  like a baby does.

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