Horrible Morning
I went to work as usual in the morning. When I got off the subway and walked to the company which is a little far from the subway, it takes 20mins walk to there. I was listening to the music while walking. I held the umbrella by my right hand due to the hot weather and the left hand just put side. I put my phone in my let pocket. Suddenly I felt there was no voice in my phone and I glanced the glasses shopwindow which was besides me. I found there was a man close to me. I touched my pocket that my phone was missing. So I turned back quickly, the man who took my phone was standing behind me. I saw my phone in his hand. I said to him serious: Give back to me and he gave it to me. After I was in the office to tell my colleagues. They said the thief might be follow me a while. I think the thief was blod that happened in the morning. If it happens in the evening, I think my phone would be gone.
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Horrible Morning
I went to work as usual in the morning. When I got off the subway and walked to the company which is a little far from the subway, it takes 20mins to walk there. I was listening to the music while I was walking. I held the umbrella by my right hand due to the hot weather and I put the left hand just on the side. I put my phone in my left pocket. Suddenly I felt there was no voice in my phone and I glanced the glasses shopwindow which was besides me. I saw there was a man close to me. I touched my pocket and my phone was missing. So I went back quickly, the man who took my phone was standing behind me. I saw my phone in his hand. I said to him seriously: Give it back to me and he gave it to me. After I was in the office to tell my colleagues. They said the thief might has been following me a while. I think the thief was blod that happened in the morning.(what do you mean by "blod"? :-) )If it happens in the evening, I think my phone would be gone.
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A Horrible Morning
I went to work as usual in the morning. When I got off the subway I walked to my workplace, which is a little way from the subway. It takes 20 minutes to walk there. I was listening to the music while walking. I was holding a parasol in my right hand due to the hot weather, and my left hand was just hanging at my side. I put my phone in my left pocket. Suddenly I noticed there was no sound coming from my phone, and I glanced in the reflection of the shop window which was besides me. I saw that there was a man close to me. I touched my pocket and found that my phone was missing. So I turned around quickly. The man who took my phone was standing behind me. I saw my phone in his hand. I said to him seriously: "Give my phone back to me" and he gave it back to me. Afterwards, when I was in the office, I told my colleagues. They said the thief might have been following me for a while. I think the thief was bold to attempt to rob me in the morning. If it had happened in the evening, I think my phone would be gone.I think by "blod" you probably mean "bold". Is that right?
An umbrella is for the rain. When it's for the sun, we call it a "parasol".
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