Summer Festival
Hey do you know there will be a summer festival this Saturday?
This coming Saturday? No I didn't know that. Are you going?
Yes, I will. I can't wait!
What will there be there?
There will be lots of fireworks, rolls of strolls, and a live band performance!
Sounds so fun! I wish I could go.. If only I don't have work that day.
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Hi, Are you on your way home?
Yes, which way are you going?
I usually go this way but I'm gonna stop by a nearby bakery today so either way is ok. Let's go part of the way together.
Sure. So how was the festival?
Oh it was great untill the middle.
What happened in the middle?
It started raining. So we couldn't see fireworks.
Oh I'm sorry.
Plus we didn't have an umbrella. So we all got wet to the skin. We should've checked the whether forcast beforehand.
Oh I hope you'll be able to have fun next time. There will be more festivals coming in this summer.
Yeah I've already checked the next one. It's on this weedend. Maybe we should go together!
I'd love to! I'm off that day. so what day and time will we get together?
hmm how about this Saturday evening? I prefer around 6PM.
6PM is perfect! I'm looking forward to it.
Me too! I can't wait! ....oh wait!! I heard Typhoon is coming and it may hit Okinawa this Saturday!
No way... Maybe we should just stay in and study English.
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Summer Festival
Hey did you know there will be a summer festival this Saturday?This coming Saturday? No I didn't know that. Are you going?
Yes, I am. I can't wait!
What will there be there?
There will be lots of fireworks, food, games, and a live concert!
Sounds so fun! I wish I could go.. If only I didn't have to work that day.
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Hi, are you on your way home?
Yes, which way are you going?
I usually go this way but I'm gonna stop by a nearby bakery today, so either way is ok. Let's walk together.
Sure. So how was the festival?
Oh it was great until about 7 o'clock.
What happened at 7?
It started raining. So we couldn't see fireworks.
Oh I'm sorry.
Plus we didn't have an umbrella. So we got soaked. We should've checked the weather before we left.
Oh I hope you'll be able to have fun next time. There'll be many more festivals this summer.
Yeah I already checked on the next one. It's on this weekend. Maybe we should go together!
I'd love to! I'm off that day. So what day and time will we get together?
Hmm, how about this Saturday evening? I prefer around 6 PM.
6 PM is perfect! I'm looking forward to it.
Me too! I can't wait! ....oh wait!! I heard typhoon is coming and it may hit Okinawa this Saturday!
No way... Maybe we should just stay in and study English.
Very good! I changed some things quite a bit to give you an idea of what a native speaker might actually say. Some things sounded unnatural. The last sentence is the BEST!
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Summer Festival
Hey did you know there will be a summer festival this Saturday?This coming Saturday? No I didn't know that. Are you going?
Yes, I will. I can't wait!
What will there be there?
There will be lots of fireworks, rolls of strolls(do you mean "rows of stalls"), and a live band performance!
Sounds so fun! I wish I could go.. If only I don't have work that day.
________________________________________________________________________
Hi, Are you on your way home?
Yes, which way are you going?
I usually go this way but I'm gonna stop by a nearby bakery today so either way is ok. Let's go part of the way together.
Sure. So how was the festival?
Oh it was great until the middle.
What happened in the middle?
It started raining. So we couldn't see the fireworks.
Oh I'm sorry.
Plus we didn't have an umbrella. So we all got wet all the way down to the skin. We should've checked the whether forecast beforehand.
Oh I hope you'll be able to have fun next time. There will be more festivals coming in up this summer.
Yeah I've already checked for the next one. It's on this weekend. Maybe we should go together!
I'd love to! I'm off that day. so what day and time will we get together?
hmm how about this Saturday evening? I prefer around 6PM.
6PM is perfect! I'm looking forward to it.
Me too! I can't wait! ....oh wait!! I heard a typhoon is coming and it may hit Okinawa this Saturday!
No way... Maybe we should just stay in and study English.
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