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Dunkirk
Last sunday I watched "Dunkirk", and honestly I think that this movie should win the oscar, even that the year isn't finished. It is so tense, Nolan made my heart beat so strong that I almost had a heart attack. Hans Zimmer and non linearity are in this movie, and it totally makes the difference, once it is the major factor to make the movie so tense. I watched another Nolan's movie, like "Inception", "Interestelar" and the Batman's trilogy, but Dunkirk is better than all those movies.Last Sunday I watched the movie "Dunkirk", and I honestly think that this movie should win an Oscar; even though the year isn't finished. It is such an intense movie, and Nolan made my heart beat so strongly, that I almost had a heart attack. Hans Zimmer was in this movie, and it had a non linear quality that made it so intense! I have watched a few other of Nolan's movies, such as "Inception", "Interstellar", and "The Batman Trilogy"; but Dunkirk is better than all of those movies.
You had a few irregular words in your paragraph, but overall it wasn't too bad. Keep working at it!
Dunkirk
Last Sunday I watched "Dunkirk", and honestly I think that this movie should win the Oscar, even though this year is not yet over. It is so tense, Nolan made my heart beat so strong that I almost had a heart attack. A Hans Zimmer score (?) and non linearity are in this movie, and it totally makes the difference, and a major factor to make the movie so tense. I watched some other Nolan's movies, like "Inception", "Interstellar" and the Batman trilogy, but Dunkirk is better than all of them.Very well written!
Dunkirk
Last Sunday I watched "Dunkirk", and honestly I think that this movie should win the Oscar, even though that the year isn't finished. It is so tense, director Christopher Nolan made my heart beat so strong that I almost had a heart attack. Hans Zimmer and a non-linear timeline are two features of non linearity are in this movie, and it totally makes the difference, once it is and is the major factor to make that makes the movie so tense. I watched some other Nolan movies another of Nolan's movie, like "Inception", "Interestellar" and the Batman's trilogy, but Dunkirk is better than all those movies.Really good job! And I agree completely with your analysis of the movie too!
Dunkirk
Last sunday I watched "Dunkirk", and honestly I think that this movie should win an Oscar even if the year isn't finished yet. It is so tense, Nolan made my heart beat so strong that I almost had a heart attack. Hans Zimmer and non linearity are in this movie and it totally makes the difference. It is the major factor to make the movie so tense. I watched other Nolan movies, like "Inception", "Interstellar" and the Batman's trilogy, but Dunkirk is better than all those movies.=========================
Hi! Good effort here! I haven't seen Dunkirk but I'm so excited to see it now! Let's just go over some points:
- Be careful with comma placement and writing long sentences, sometimes your sentences are quite long and it can actually be split into two different sentences.
- Another - singular, other - plural
- In your last sentence we use Nolan as an adjective to describe the movies
Hope this helps!
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