我爱芝加哥
芝加哥
我爱芝加哥。它很漂亮的城市。芝加哥很有名因为冬天的时候又冷又风很大。现在天气不错。天气有点暖和。周末的时候我喜欢去看密歇根湖。夏季的时候密西根湖有很多人。大家喜欢密西根湖里游泳。我不怎么喜欢游泳，可是我带我的照相机照片。
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1.我爱芝加哥。它是一座很漂亮的城市。
2.大家喜欢在密西根湖里游泳。
3.我不怎么喜欢游泳，可是我带我的照相机照片。（this sentence lacks a time, When do you take photos with your camera, in Summer or in weekends? What's more, this sentence lacks a verb, if you want to express the meaning of "take photos", please use "照相" instead of "照片", because "照片" is only a noun. ）
4.By the way, if you do not want to remove "照片", just add a verb before "照片", such as "拍" and the sentence wil be that: "可是我带我的照相机拍照片"。
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我爱芝加哥
芝加哥我爱芝加哥。它是一座很漂亮的城市。芝加哥很有名因为冬天的时候又冷又风又很大。现在天气不错。天气有点暖和。周末的时候我喜欢去看密歇根湖。夏季的时候密西根湖有很多人。大家喜欢在密西根湖里游泳。我不怎么喜欢游泳，可是我带我的照相机去拍照片。
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