添削を お願いします。
1.銀時は 明るくなります。
2.時間は 神楽を 綺麗 にした。(translation:Time has made kagura beautiful.)
3.
4.天気は 涼しい ほうがいいです。
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 2
0
Thank you for your correction. In the first sentence, I want to say that gintoki' forehead becomes more bright after losing much hair.
0
Hi!
I could not understand what you want to say by
1.銀時は 明るくなります。
So I can not give you an advice.
about the sentence 2.
時間は 神楽を 綺麗 にした。
Please use 「時は（ときは）」instead of 時間.
Usually, we think jikan for hours. But toki for time and years.
Hope this will help you :)
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
