Profit or Loss
We had a project before 2 years ago that we got from our very important clients . At the begining the project was seems run smoothly . Last year the project was begin to mass production, and in order to collect payment, we check the shipping quanity and then we make VAT invoice to our client every month, but now when our colleague try to check the shipping quantity again, we found so many defective products that effect our profit. so I got an financial cost of actual production from our financial department, I make a list includes our financial cost and our selling price based on the total shipping quanity. The project includes 7 colors parts ,I found 2 colors parts can make profit, but 5 colors parts are loss money. because the shipping quantity of the 2 colors parts are more than the 5 colors,so the total is make a little profit.
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Profit or Loss
We had a project 2 years ago that we got from our very important clients . At the beginning, the project seemed to run smoothly . Last year the project was to begin mass production and in order to collect payment, we checked the shipping quantity and then we made [a/]VAT invoice to our client every month. But now, when our colleague tried to check the shipping quantity again, we found so many defective products that affected our profit. So I got a financial cost of actual production from our financial department, I made a list that includes our financial cost and our selling price based on the total shipping quantity. The project includes 7 color parts, I found 2 color parts can make a profit, but 5 color parts is a loss because the shipping quantity of the 2 color parts are more than the 5 colors,so the total makes little profit.================================
Hi! Good effort here, I'm glad you were able to explain the situation very well! However, please be careful with the SIMPLE PAST TENSE especially if you're talking about a past/completed action. EFFECT is a noun while AFFECT is a verb. In the last part of the paragraph, we use COLOR without an S because we are using the number as an adjective ex 5 color parts, 8 year old boy.
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Profit or Loss
We had a project before more than 2 years ago that we got from an our very important clients . At the beginning, the project was seems ruan smoothly . Last year, the project was begian to mass production, and in order to collect payment, we checked the shipping quanittity and then we makde the VAT invoice to our client every month,. However, but now when our colleague tryies to check the shipping quantity again, we fouind so many defective products that eaffect our profit. soTherefore, I got determined an the financial cost of actual production from our financial department, and I makde a list that includes our financial cost and our selling price based on the total shipping quantity. The project includes 7 colors parts,. I found that 2 colors parts can make a profit, but 5 colors parts are loss will lose money. because the shipping quantity of the 2 colors parts are more than the 5 colors,so the total is make a little profit. (I dont understand the last phrase or sentence in yellow)Want to progress faster?
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