Little thing called happiness
I would be so grateful if someone would like to correct following dairy for me, thanks!
Maybe due to the distance of half earth away from my hometown, my alimentary system does‘t seem working well in the USA. Therefore, my husband makes a rule for me which is eating oats everyday. He usually gets up one hour earlier than me, and then leave a bowl of oats mixed with yogurt and milk. I really don't like oats so much, especially the oats in the milk long than 30 minutes. The oats turns soft and into mush when I have breakfast. So I can't help myself to complain about it at the night of yesterday.
Then this morning, I saw a bow with oats and a bowl of milk on the table. They are separate but they seems so cute. My husband has always been a careless guy, so when he did this little thing for me. I am somewhat touched.
Sometimes we can't define happiness or describe it clearly, it is only when you experience life that you will find it is composed of so many little things in our daily life. I will try my best to learn more quickly to lighten our burdens.
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I would be so grateful if someone would like to corrects my following dairy for me, entry. Thanks!Maybe due to because the distance of half earth away from my hometown is half the world away, my alimentary system does‘t seem to be working well here in the USA. So Therefore, 这是你的日记, 不須要用严正的辞句, 虽然不錯但沒有温暖感 my husband makes a rule for me which is to eating oats everyday. He usually gets up one an hour earlier than me, and then leaves a bowl of oats mixed with yogurt and milk. I really especially don't like oats so much, especially the oats them soaking in the milk longer than half an hour 30 minutes. They become oats turns soft and into mushy when I get to them have breakfast. So I can't help myself but to grumble complain 丈夫不是工人, complain 的語气太重了about it at the night before. of yesterday.
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Surprise! Surprise! 这样就可以加上文章彩色Then This morning on the table, 給读者一些悬念無 I saw a was a bowl with of oats and in another one containing some a bowl of milk on the table. They are separate but they seems looked so cute side by side. My husband has always been a careless guy, so when he did this little gesture thing for me. I am somewhat touched my heart immensely.
Sometimes we can't define happiness or describe it clearly, it is only through when you experiencelife experiences that one you will finds it is composed of has so many little things affecting in our daily life. I will try my best to learn more 中文式結论 因此成为 Chinglish. 英文母語者会这样表白, quickly to lighten our burdens. The Road of Life is long and winding, better to become quickly an old hand so that whatever is hurled against us will be lightened.
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Little thing called happiness
I would be so grateful if someone would like to correct following dairy for me, thanks!Most likely due to being halfway around the world from my hometown, my stomach hasn't been feeling well in the U.S.. Therefore, my husband made a rule for me to eat oats everyday. He usually gets up one hour earlier than me and leaves a bowl of oats mixed with yogurt and milk. I really don't like oats so much, especially when the oats have sat in the milk longer than 30 minutes. The oats turn soft and into mush when I have breakfast. So I couldn't help complaining about it yesterday night.
Then this morning, I saw a bowl with oats and a bowl of milk on the table. They are separate, but they seemed so cute. My husband has always been a careless guy, so when he did this little thing for me I am somewhat touched.
Sometimes we can't define happiness or describe it clearly. It is only when you experience life that you will find it is composed of so many little things in our daily lives. I will try my best to learn more quickly to lighten our burdens.
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Yes, I will. Thanks for your comment :) Have a good day!
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so cute detail :)
you should thank him for that little moment of hapiness ;) enjoy it!
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