An infinite trip

An infinite trip

Last year, I did took one of my longest trips by car. It is was a seven-hour (<--Typically, numbers under twelve are written as words.) journey if you are one is (<--Try to avoid writing in the generic/impersonal "you.") lucky, an eight-hour journey on average. I did it to go to on holiday with my girlfriend, so we were in the right mood to tackle such a thing. The real problem was the way back. After seven days of total relaxation, the thought of driving for so long had already brought me down, but the worst had yet to come. The first four hours went through by quite easily but at 3 o'clock P.M., we got stuck. There was a very long queue right ahead of us. The sun was so hot you that we could have taken suntan become tanned on the road. It took us nearly one hour to pass it by and to discover that it was due to works construction on the road. Fortunately, from there, we didn't have any other problems. There was only another one other important event: we saw an incredibly big large (<--"Big" sounds more childish than "large.") fire. It I had never happened to me to seen such a big huge blaze. It was summer, so it was normal to meet little encounter small fires, but I had never seen before something like that before. (<--We can end sentences with prepositions in English.)

Very nicely written, Federico! Thank you for sharing your adventure with us, and I hope my corrections help you =)