My best friends
I think that every person should have a best friend. Who can we have fun with, to ask helping, tell our secrets and to live how we want, enjoy all what's around, appreacting it. That's person I have. Even not one, two! My best friends are Natasha and Kate. With one I study at school, with one I spend summer time in village. Natasha is a real german girl. She likes all German! German as a country, the language of country and culture...briefly she wants to be a german. But she has never been to Germany. All her family has an opinion that the german language is very improtant, I agree. The most part of her family know german language not bad. She studies at school with german language. Her teacher often tells her and other students stories about Germany and she, Natasha, shares with me it. Kate is a real fan of rock-n-roll, serials... I have studied with her in one class to 8-th . After we parted ways. But..I mean we study in other rooms, class, where other people, we know them But I need sometimes to talk with her. She makes me more happy and I miss her even I need to go next. I am happy that we will go learning in one college, I hope. How you do not want or not but friends make your life more colourful! Appreciate the real friends!
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My best friends
I think that each of us should have a best friend with whom we can have fun, ask for help, tell our secrets to and live how we want. enjoy all that is around us, and appreciating it. That's who I have, not just one, but two! My best friends are Natasha and Kate. With one I study at school and with the other, I spend summer time in the village. Natasha is a real German girl. She likes all that is German: German as a country, a language and a culture...briefly she wants to be German. But, she has never been to Germany. Her entire family is of the opinion that the German language is very important, I agree. Most of her family know German fairly well. She studies German at school. Her teacher often tells her and other students stories about Germany and she, Natasha, shares them with me. Kate is a real fan of rock-n-roll and serials. I have studied with her in one class to 8th grade and then we parted ways. But, I mean that we study in different rooms with other people. We know them but I need to talk with her sometimes. She makes me more happy and I miss her even more. I am happy that we will go to the same college... I hope. How you do not want or not but friends make your life more colorful! Appreciate your real friends!I did my best to correct your paragraph so that it sounded natural in both style and grammar. I crossed out a line that did not seem to connect with the theme of your sentence. I changed the spelling of "colourful" to "colorful" because that is American English (mine). The words in red do not make sense to me and I could not change it to the meaning that you wanted. I hope that this is helpful. I enjoyed reading your paragraph and helping you with it.--Richard
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What a heartfelt read! You seem to really love your friends (:
Let me know if you have any questions about the corrections I made. - Tiffany
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My best friends
I think that every person should have a best friend who can we have fun with, to ask for help, tell our secrets to, and to live how we want (this phrase doesn't really make sense with regards to having a friend?), and enjoy and appreciate life with. These are the kinds of people I have in my life, not just one, but two! My best friends are Natasha and Kate. I study with one of them at school, and I spend my summers with one in a village. Natasha is a real German girl at heart. She likes all things German: German as a country, the language of country and culture. To put it briefly, she wants to be a German, but she has never even been to Germany. All her family has the opinion that the German language is very important, and I agree. Most of her family knows that the German language is not bad. She studies Gernam at school. Her teacher often tells her and other students stories about Germany and she, Natasha, shares it with me. Kate is a real fan of rock-n-roll, serials (what are you referring to that is "serial"? "Serial" is an adjective) ... I have studied with her from first to eighth grade. Afterwards, we parted ways, but, we still study in other rooms and classes, where we know other people. However, I still need sometimes to talk with her sometimes. She makes me more happy and I miss her even I need to go next (go to the next what? 'Next' is an adjective). I would be happy and hope that we attend the same college. How could you not want them? Friends make your life more colourful! Appreciate your real friends!Want to progress faster?
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