How I spent weekend.
That weekend I spent well. I relaxed on coast of big lake. Usually I go fish there, but that weekend I swam few hour. This lake
is very old and is 10 miles to the nearest town. I think, this lake one of the biggest and the oldest lake in our area. If you found a error, correct me please.
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How I spent the weekend.
I spent the weekend well. I relaxed on the coast of a big lake. Usually I go fishing there, but that weekend I swam for a few hours. This lake is very old and it is 10 miles to the nearest town. I think, this lake is one of the biggest and the oldest lake in our area. If you found an error, correct me please.1
How I spent the weekend.
I spent the weekend well. I relaxed on the shore of a big lake. Usually I go fishing there, but that weekend I swam for a few hours. This lake is very old and it is 10 miles to the nearest town. I think that this lake one of the biggest and the oldest lakes in our area. If you find an error, correct me please.I changed coast to shore. A continent has a coast with an ocean. A lake would not have a coast, rather a shore.
Although grammatical, the comma after "I think" is awkward. Here is where the word "that" should be included.
Although "found" is not ungrammatical, the request is for an action that I am doing at the moment and therefore, "find" sounds more natural.
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