Letter to Bank
Dear Sir,
I am writing to reply your letter I received three days ago. you state that I overdrawn 240 $ from my account and I will be charged 70 $
I am sorry to told you that you have mistake in your letter statement. I was paying monthly installments 300 $ for my car for 24 month but in January I visited your bank branch and I paid all remaining installments, I paid 2150 $, it was the remaining installments of the eight months, on the same hand I checked my receipts, the total of money I paid are 6800 plus 2150, this mean I paid all value of my loan.
Perhaps it be useful to review all installment receipts for my loan, then you should cancel the overdrawn from my account.
Yours faithfully,
Hassan Ali
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Letter to Bank
Dear Sir,I am writing to reply to your letter that I received three days ago. You state that I was overdrawn $240 from my account and I will be charged $70.
I am sorry to tell you that you have a mistake in your letter. I was paying monthly installments of $300 for my car for 24 months but in January I visited your bank branch and I paid all remaining installments, I paid $2150. It was the remaining installments of eight months, on the same hand I checked my receipts, the total money I paid was $6800 plus $2150, this means I paid all the balance of my loan.
Perhaps it would be useful to review all installment receipts for my loan, then you should cancel the overdrawn fee from my account.
Yours faithfully,
Hassan Ali
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Letter to Bank
Dear Sir,I am writing to a reply to your letter that I received three days ago. You state that I am overdrawn 240 $ $240 from my account, and I will be charged $70.
I am sorry to told you say that you have made a mistake in your letter statement. I was paying monthly installments of $300 for my car for 24 months but in January I visited your bank branch and I paid all of the remaining installments. I paid $2150, which was the total of the remaining installments of for the eight months. on the same hand I also checked my receipts, and the total of money amount I paid are was $6800 plus $2150, this which means I paid all the full value of my loan.
Perhaps it would be useful to review all of the installment receipts for my loan, then you should cancel remove the overdrawn status from my account.
Yours faithfully,
Hassan Ali
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