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about what happened yesterday Yesterdy I 'm very happy went to work in the morning. This day was friday and The operation capacity wasn't much, I thought the day could cross very much happily . As a result, The woman who has mental derangement to scolded me unexpectedly, after for several minutes ,She called to colleague of Research & Development in my factory and called down him. Of so so, Because she has no order and evaded responsibility to gave each person whom she cooperateed. I feeled constrained on this day ,The day wasn't very happy , I want to forget this day. and then , I want to learn changes myself and make a girl of happiness.. that is all.

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About Yesterday

I was very happy as I went to work yesterday morning.  It was Friday and workload was light.  I thought I could pass the day without problems.  This deranged woman1 scolded me unexpectedly.
Several minutes later she called a colleague down from the Research & Development department down.  As she did not have any order ....2

I felt unhappy3 and forget the unfortunate incidents happened to day.  I need to learn how to handle such situations and not let no negative thoughts bother me.  After all I am a girl of happiness, ain't I? :)

You need to be aware of using big words unless you know their meaning well because there are much subtleness in them.  But of course if you don't use them and get corrected, how would you learn? :)  However my advice to you is to build up your vocabulary of simple words first before handling the more difficult ones.


1.   Need to explain who she is,  your supervisor, a co-worker or what? otherwise readers will really think there is a real lunatic running in your workplace.  You are usings such adjactives figuratively. 

2.   You used "because" but gave no explanation.  Whatever you were trying to express makes no sense to me at all.  If you can, write in Chinese so that I know how to correct.

3.  I don't understand the use of the word "constrained" here.  Even if you use the word, "restricted", it still makes not much sense.  Write in Chinese for me to understand what's going on here.


about what happened yesterday

Yesterdy I 'm very happy went to work in the morning. This day was friday and
The operation capacity wasn't much, I thought the day could cross very much happily .
As a result, The woman who has mental derangement to scolded me unexpectedly, after for several minutes ,She called to colleague of Research & Development in my factory and called down him.
Of so so, Because she has no order and evaded responsibility to gave each person whom she cooperateed.
I feeled constrained on this day ,The day wasn't very happy , I want to forget this
day. and then , I want to learn changes myself and make a girl of happiness..
that is all.

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