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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am a 21 years old colleage student.I have one reason to study English. The reason is to be able to talk with native English speakers. I'm afraid my english is correct. Please teach me English ^^;

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am a 21 year-old colleage student. I have one reason to study English. The reason is to be able to talk with native English speakers.
I'm afraid my english is not correct. Please teach me English ^^;

(Alternate version - sounds better)
I am a 21 year-old college student. I am learning English so that I can talk with native English speakers. I'm worried that my English is incorrect, so please help me learn!


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Your original entry was correct except for the "not" that BYLO mentioned, but it didn't sound very natural. The alternate version says the same thing with a more natural flow.

よくやった!


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" I'm afraid my English is correct" Either you forgot "not" or you are afraid of something good :) "I'm afraid my English is not good enough"

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