Please help me modify this Business email, thank you so much
Hi There, this is Zoe from China who is working at a 3d printer manufacturing company. I'm learning English.
As a international sales it's really important for me to write an eye-catching promotional Email to the potential customer.
While I'm not doing good in my work. I do need to improve my writing skills. That's why I came here.
This is one of my email content for your reference.
Please I need to learn not only writing in correct grammer, but also expressing appropriate emotions.
Thank you so much for your help.
Title: Leading Manufacturer of 3D Printer
Content:
Hi ,
I'm Zoe from XXX Tech China, a professional 3d printer manufacturer for more than 3 years with strong R&D team, focusing on 3d printer only.
We manufacture 3d printers for some other suppliers on alibaba and supply 3d printer sold on 3dprintersonlinestore/Amazon US/LAZADA and other shopping website.
We'd love to be your supplier. Good quality 3d printer with competitive price will definitely be offered.
Please contact me so I can show you more details.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
If you are not purchaser in your company, could you please forward this email to him/her?
Thank you in advance.
Sincerely,
Zoe Huang
Shenzhen xxxx Co.,Ltd
Tel/WhatsApp: +86 xxxxxxxxxx
Skype xxxxxxxxxx
Your reliable 3D Printer Supplier !
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Please help me modify this Business email, thank you so much
Hi There, this is Zoe from China who is working at a 3d printer manufacturing company. I'm learning English.As a international sales it's really important for me to write an eye-catching promotional Email to the potential customer.
While I'm not doing good in my work. I do need to improve my writing skills. That's why I came here.
This is one of my email content for your reference.
Please I need to learn not only writing in correct grammer, but also expressing appropriate emotions.
Thank you so much for your help.
Title: Leading Manufacturer of 3D Printer
Content:
Hi ,
I'm Zoe from XXX Tech China, a professional 3d printer manufacturer. We have a more than 3 years with strong R&D team, focusing only on 3dD printers only for more than 3 years.
We manufacture 3dD printers for some other suppliers on alibaba. and We also supply 3dD printers sold on 3dprintersonlinestore/, Amazon US/, LAZADA, and other shopping websites.
We'd love to be your supplier.! We offer good quality 3dD printers with at competitive prices will definitely be offered.
Please contact me so I can show provide you with more details.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
If you are not purchaser in your company, could you please forward this email to him/her?
Thank you in advance.
Sincerely,
Zoe Huang
Shenzhen xxxx Co.,Ltd
Tel/WhatsApp: +86 xxxxxxxxxx
Skype xxxxxxxxxx
Your reliable 3D Printer Supplier !
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Please help me modify this Business email, thank you so much
Hi There, this is Zoe from China who is working at a 3d printer manufacturing company. I'm learning English.As a international sales it's really important for me to write an eye-catching promotional Email to the potential customer.
While I'm not doing good in my work. I do need to improve my writing skills. That's why I came here.
This is one of my email content for your reference.
Please I need to learn not only writing in correct grammer, but also expressing appropriate emotions.
Thank you so much for your help.
Title: Leading Manufacturer of 3D Printer
Content:
Hi ,
I'm Zoe from XXX Tech China, a professional 3d printer manufacturer. I've been on the R&D team focusing on the 3D printer for more than 3 years. with strong R&D team, focusing on 3d printer only.
We manufacture 3dD printers for some other suppliers on alibaba, and supply 3d printer sold on on amazon at 3dprintersonlinestore/Amazon US/LAZADA, and other shopping websites.
We'd love to be your supplier.! We offer Good quality 3dD printers with at competitive prices will definitely be offered.
Please Feel free to contact me so I can show you for more details.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
If you are not purchaser in your company, could you please forward this email to him/her?
Thank you in advance.
Sincerely,
Zoe Huang
Shenzhen xxxx Co.,Ltd
Tel/WhatsApp: +86 xxxxxxxxxx
Skype xxxxxxxxxx
Your reliable 3D Printer Supplier
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