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The impact on the readers is an identification effect because describe a familiar surrounding and use single vocabulary.
Although author describe the artist's trajectory, It is not very exact about him work. The article is relevance because it emphasizes on local sculptor’s work and is orientate to surroundings of the artist and is sufficiency about its extension also exposes some experiences of the personal life of the artists.
The tone is serious and objective, informative biographical type, although something natural, does not present omissions because it is open and flexible. In other words, it should not contain any specific information.
The language is formal and natural, although clear and close to the reader
The structure a format: The writer introduces the reader to the context through a description of the surroundings of the sculptor's work and a brief presentation of the artist as well as his mark in the environment of the west of Scotland. It develops the theme about the work and influence of the sculptor's surrounding, although it does not have a chronological sequence to achieve the proposed objective of exposing the artist's work.
It is a spontaneous text, the extension of the paragraphs is adequate and gives ideas clearly.
Only a photo of the work is used that is described at the beginning of the text, it is relevant because it supports the argument.
The author reached the objective of the writing because he could describe the artist's work and the development of the creative process in the personal life and influences of the artist
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Can you help me?
The impact on the readers is an identification effect, because it describes a familiar surrounding and uses single vocabulary.Although the author describes the artist's trajectory, it is not very exact about his work. The article is relevant because it emphasizes the local sculptor’s work and is orientated to the surroundings of the artist. and is sufficiency about its extension(?) It also exposes some experiences of the personal life of the artists.
The tone is serious and objective. The author uses informative biographical type. although something natural does not present omissions because it is open and flexible.(?) In other words, it should not contain any specific information.
The language is formal and natural, although clear and close to the reader.
The structure a format: The writer introduces the reader to the context through a description of the surroundings of the sculptor's work and a brief presentation of the artist, as well as his mark in the environment of the west of Scotland. It develops the theme of the work and the influence of the sculptor's surrounding, although it does not have a chronological sequence to achieve the proposed objective of exposing the artist's work.
It is a spontaneous text, the extension of the paragraphs is adequate and communicates ideas clearly.
A photo of the work is used that is described at the beginning of the text, it is relevant because it supports the argument.
The author reached the objective of the writing because he could describe the artist's work and the development of the creative process in the personal life and influences of the artist.
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I marked some crossed out areas with (?) because I could not understand what you were trying to say.
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