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Diary, July 9th; Sunday This weekend, My husband and I went to the hot spring. It is located in same prefecture we live, took for about 1 hour and 30 min by car. We visited there at the first time. We took the hot spring bath, and had good dinner. On Sunday, we made a ceramic art. I made a square plate. I want to eat sashimi using this plate. My husband made a bowl for salad. We spent very complete 2days.

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Diary, July 9th; Sunday

This weekend, my husband and I went to the hot spring. It is located in the same prefecture  that we live. It took for about 1 hour and 30 minutes by car.  It was our first visit. We visited there at the first time. We took the hot spring bath, and had  a good dinner. On Sunday, we learnt how to make made a ceramic art. I made a square plate. I want to eat sashimi from using this plate. My husband made a bowl for salad/salad bowl. We spent a very  enjoyable /full complete 2 days.

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Diary, July 9th; Sunday

This weekend, my husband and I went to the hot spring. It is located in same prefecture (area sounds much better) where we live, it took for about 1 hour and 30 min by car. It was the first  time we visited the hot spring. We took the hot spring bath, and had a good dinner. On Sunday, we made a ceramic art. I made a square plate. I want to eat sashimi using this plate. My husband made a bowl for salad. We spent very complete 2days.(??) 

Did you want to say 2 fulfilling days? "On Sunday, yesturday, next week...sounds better in the end of the phrase. 

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