Diary: July 8th, Saturday
I received Thai 5th grade result today. I failed it. I am sad and I’m frustrated that I couldn't pass it. I will try it next year. I will pass it next year. I will do my best. I will study Thai harder. Please teach someone Thai.
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Diary: July 8th, Saturday
I received my Thai 5th grade result today. And guess what, I failed it. I am sad and frustrated that I couldn't pass it. I will try again next year. Hopefully, I will pass it by next year. I will do my best and study harder. Please teach someone Thai.----------------------------------------------------------
There was a lack of synchronisation in your narrative and lots of phrases that would make it look redundant. Not bad in its original form but sounded repetitive. Your first line is more like a personified sentence without the 'my'.
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