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It Occurred To Me That...
It occurred to me, that I haven't booked a vacation yet. As a rule of thumb, most people go on vacation in August here in Italy. This might be due to the fact, that it's too hot to work during this time of year, or perhaps it's just a tradition.
The thing is, the closer you book a vacation to the month of August, the more expensive flights or train tickets will be. So, I guess the best thing to do, is to stay home until September! What do you think?
Overall Guido, I think this was written pretty well. I did notice problems, mainly with spelling, capitalization of proper nouns and the beginning of sentences, and incorrect word order and usage. Inoltre, in inglese, "holiday" significa un giorno federale riconosciuto fuori dal lavoro quando la maggior parte degli uffici e delle imprese sono chiusi. Piuttosto usiamo la parola "vacanza" per significare andare in un viaggio da qualche parte. If you have any questions, please let me know! If you would like help to practice and improve your English, I'd be happy to help you if you would like!
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