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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello,everyone ! My name is Alice . I come from China . I am a college student now ,and my major is English Education . | like English very much . My dream is to be an English teacher , and my motto is :Nothing is impossible. I have lots of hobbies , such like :sports 、planing music instruments 、give speech in public 、drawing and so on. I like making friends . Now , I really want to make foreign friends to speak more English,to have more new different chatting friends and to make life more colourful !

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello,everyone !
My name is Alice. I come from China. I am a college student now and my major is English Education . | like English very much . My dream is to be an English teacher and my motto is: Nothing is impossible.
I have lots of hobbies,such likeas:sports, planying music instruments, give speech in public speaking, drawing and so on.

I like making friends. Now I really want to make foreign 1English speaking friends to speak more practice oral English, to have more new different chatting friends to chat with and to make life more colourful !

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See my notes on "My Suspicion Or Perception?"
http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/My%20Suspicion%20Or%20Perception.htm

Your English is better than most of your countrymen.  However you need to learn about punctuation rules.  Each punctuation mark does not need a space before it but a compulsory single space after it except for the quotation marks which require no space while 2 spaces after a period or fullstop.

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