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a self introduction of the postgraduate interview Good morning , professor , my name is Josie , a medical student of Sun-Set Sen University. The reason I’m here introducing myself is that I want to conduct study in postgraduate. In my college life , I have tried my best to complete the learning tasks , and my grade point now is 3.5 , which is ranking 93 out of 454 . Beside this, I have participated in some competitions , such as the medical students experimental skills contest , in which I have gotten the second place with my partners . Furthermore , I have taken part an active part in extracurricular activities , for example , the science guide contest in Guangdong province , or some charitable activities . I really enjoyed it , and it was those experience made me know more about the saying “sometimes to cure , often to help , always to accompany ”. There is definitely that life always have some regrets. I have partaken a summer research , but I haven’t followed up because of my own reasons . This thing may be one of the most regretful things in my college life . Although the experience was very short, but it had changed my attitude of scientific research . I do not seek to be a celebrity master, but I hope that I can help somebody through what I have learned. being a surgeon is my desire, so I’ll pay the greatest efforts to achieve it. I hope professor can give me this opportunity. Thank you!

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a self introduction for a  postgraduate interview

Good morning professor , Dear Professor [name of professor],

my name is Josie , I'm a medical student of Sun-Set Sen University. The reason I’m here introducing myself because I want to conduct postgraduate study in your department.

In my college life , I have tried my best to complete the learning tasks , and m Professors are more interested in your grades than that you try hard. Talk about how hard you work in the interview, but in the letter it sounds a little desperate!

My grade point now is 3.5 , which ranks 93 out of 454 . Beside this, I have participated in some competitions , such as a medical students experimental skills contest , in which I got the second place with my partners . Furthermore , I have taken part an active part in extracurricular activities , for example , the science guide contest in Guangdong province , and some charitable activities . I really enjoyed it , and it was those experiences helped me to better understand the saying “sometimes to cure , often to help , always to accompany ”.

There is definitely that life always have some regrets. I have partaken a summer research , but I haven’t followed up because of my own reasons . This thing may be one of the most regretful things in my college life . Why include this? Focus on the positive!

My short time taking part in a summer research programme has changed my attitude towards scientific research . I do not seek fame and fortune, but I hope that I can help as many people as possible through what I have learned. Becoming a surgeon is my desire, so I’ll pay the greatest efforts to achieve it. I hope professor you can give me this opportunity. In English speaking countries, we generally don't call people 'professor' or 'teacher'. 'You' is absolutely normal. In most places you can call a professor by their first name, the same as a friend.

Thank you very much for your time.

Yours sincerely,

Josie Lin include your full name at the bottom

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