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Dear Sarah,

I hope you and your parents are well. I was really excited after READING/WHEN I READ your question about a possible destination about FOR  this summer holidays! I think I have a perfect option  SUGGESTION for you: Iceland!
It has been a while SINCE we do not see LAST SAW each other, but I remember THAT you ARE/WERE an adventurous person who love nature and breath-taking locations, so I definitely think Iceland is perfect for you. I visited it last summer and it was the most enjoyable and amazing experience I have ever had.
I just drove all around the island by car during the day, and at nights I slept mostly in beautiful campings CAMPSITES, and some times in guest houses GUESTHOUSES, but they are expensive.
I will recommend you different excursions, besides you need to visit all the waterfalls around the island and the glacier lakes.
The food was not the best part of the travel TRIP, since it was quite expensive, we just got cheaper stuff from supermarkets.

Please, just call me if you need something else. I hope you will (MORE COMMON WITHOUT "WILL") enjoy the travel  TRIP as much as me.  

Best wishes!
Miguel Angel

I HOPE IT HELPS!!

Alberto.