Are these 7 sentences correct? Thanks so much for your help!
Last summer, I embarked on my first solo trip, leaving home to travel around Europe for three weeks. I’d had a rough year thanks to a layoff, a bereavement, and some relationship trouble.
For this trip, I relied on home-rental sites like Airbnb. I slept on a couch, I stayed on a boat, I spent four days in a stunning architect-designed apartment... I jumped from place to place. And I thrived.
I was creative, focused and daring, a completely different version of my procrastinator and grumpy self. After three weeks, I came back home wondering if I could keep this “nomadic” lifestyle up.
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Are these 7 sentences correct? Thanks so much for your help!
Last summer I embarked on my first solo trip, leaving home to travel around Europe for three weeks. I’d* had a rough year thanks to a layoff, a bereavement and some relationship trouble(s).For this trip, I relied on home-rental sites like Airbnb. I slept on a couch, I stayed on a boat, I spent four days in a stunning architect-designed apartment... I jumped from place to place. And I thrived.
I was creative, focused and daring, a completely different version of my procrastinating and grumpy self. After three weeks, I came back home wondering if I could keep this “nomadic” lifestyle up.
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*or, I had had ... (a kind of liaison)
Very well written!
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Are these seven (<--Typically, whole single-digit numbers are written as words. There are exceptions of course, such as dates.) sentences correct? Thanks so much for your help!
Last summer, I embarked on my first solo trip, leaving home to travel around Europe for three weeks. I’d had a rough year thanks to a layoff, a bereavement, and some relationship trouble.For this trip, I relied on home-rental sites like Airbnb. I slept on a couch, I stayed on a boat, (<--Did you only sleep on one couch and stay on only one boat during this entire trip? If so, then this is correct. If not, then these two words should be plural.) I spent four days in a stunning architect-designed apartment. I jumped from place to place, and I thrived.
I was creative, focused, (<--I always recommend inserting this optional comma.) and daring, a completely different version of my procrastinating and grumpy self. After three weeks, I came back home wondering if I could keep this “nomadic” lifestyle up.
Your English is incredibly strong, Emilie! Excellently written!
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