The rain
A few days agos, I writed a notebook where I explained how thunder is created.
Following this notebook, I decided to describe how rain is created.
A cloud is made of many macro drops of water, so small that we can't see them.
At high altitude, the air is fresh but because these drops are small and light,
hot air flows raise them from the ground to the clouds.
When it rains, all these small drops are gathering together to form a heavier drop of water.
Whent it becomes too heavy for beeing lifted up by the air, it falls.
This is how the rain is created.
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The rain
A few days agos, I writed wrote a notebook entry where I explained how thunder is created.Following this notebook, I decided to describe how rain is created.
A cloud is made of many macro microscopic drops of water, so small that we can't see them.
At high altitudes, the air is fresh but because these drops are small and light,
hot air flows raise them from the ground to the clouds.
When it rains, all these small drops are gathering together to form a heavier drop of water.
Whent it becomes too heavy for beeing lifted to be lifted up by the air, it falls.
This is how the rain is created.
Well done, Jeremy! :)
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ago not agos
I can say "I write an article every day"
you can say "I wrote yesterday"
you can say "I have just written an article"
I think you meant "being" not "beeing"
:)
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