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writing In order to improve my writing I have decide to make a review of different books I was read. Although I do not have a good knowledge about grammar or vocabulary I think the only way improve my writing is writing. I read: • Twilight, new moon and The Host by Stephenie Meyer. • The Boy in the striped pyjamas by John BOYNE. • 13 Reasons Why by Jay Asher • ALIVE (The story of The Andes Survivors) by Piers Paul Read (author of The train Robbers) • Anne Frank the Diary of a young girl edited by Otto H.Frank and Mirjam Pressler. • I am Malala y by Malala Yousafzai (the girl who stood up for Education and was shot by the Taliban) • The Alchemist by Paulo Coelho • The Magic of thinking big by Davis J Schwartz. • Positive Intelligence (only 20% of teams and individuals achieve their true potential and how you can achieve yours) by Shirzad Chamine. • The power of now (a guide to spiritual enlightenment) by Eckhart Tolle. I hope do you like my next entry in my notebook and forward for you corrections.

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writing

In order to improve my writing I have decided to make a review of several books I have read.
Although I do not have a good knowledge about grammar or vocabulary I think the only way improve my writing is by writing.
I read:
• Twilight, new moon and The Host by Stephenie Meyer.
• The Boy in the striped pyjamas by John BOYNE.
• 13 Reasons Why by Jay Asher
• ALIVE (The story of The Andes Survivors) by Piers Paul Read (author of The train Robbers)
• Anne Frank the Diary of a young girl edited by Otto H.Frank and Mirjam Pressler.
• I am Malala y by Malala Yousafzai (the girl who stood up for Education and was shot by the Taliban)
• The Alchemist by Paulo Coelho
• The Magic of thinking big by Davis J Schwartz.
• Positive Intelligence (only 20% of teams and individuals achieve their true potential and how you can achieve yours) by Shirzad Chamine.
• The power of now (a guide to spiritual enlightenment) by Eckhart Tolle.
I hope you like my next entry in my notebook and I look forward to your corrections.

Very well written! I read two of these books.

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Writing

In order to improve my writing I have decided to make a review of list of the different books I was have read.
Although I do not have a good knowledge about grammar or vocabulary, I think that the only way to improve my writing is by writing.
I read:
• Twilight, New Moon and The Host by Stephenie Meyer.
• The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas by John Boyne.
• 13 Reasons Why by Jay Asher
• Alive (The story of The Andes Survivors) by Piers Paul Read (author of The Train Robbers)
• Anne Frank the Diary of a Young Girl edited by Otto H. Frank and Mirjam Pressler.
• I am Malala y by Malala Yousafzai (the girl who stood up for education and was shot by the Taliban)
• The Alchemist by Paulo Coelho
• The Magic of Thinking Big by Davis J. Schwartz.
• Positive Intelligence (only 20% of teams and individuals achieve their true potential and how you can achieve yours) by Shirzad Chamine.
• The Power of Now (a guide to spiritual enlightenment) by Eckhart Tolle.
I hope that do you will like my next notebook entry in my notebook and I look forward for to your corrections.

Nice job Natalia!
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writing

In order to improve my writing, I have decided to make a review of different books which I was read.
Although I do not have a good knowledge of grammar or vocabulary I think the only way improve my writing is writing.
I read:
• Twilight, new moon and The Host by Stephenie Meyer.
• The Boy in the striped pajamas by John BOYNE.
• 13 Reasons Why by Jay Asher
• ALIVE (The story of The Andes Survivors) by Piers Paul Read (author of The Train Robbers)
• Anne Frank the Diary of a young girl edited by Otto H.Frank and Mirjam Pressler.
• I am Malala y by Malala Yousafzai (the girl who stood up for Education and was shot by the Taliban)
• The Alchemist by Paulo Coelho
• The Magic of thinking big by Davis J Schwartz.
• Positive Intelligence (only 20% of teams and individuals achieve their true potential and how you can achieve yours) by Shirzad Chamine.
• The power of now (a guide to spiritual enlightenment) by Eckhart Tolle.
I hope that do you like my next notebook and forward for your corrections.

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