Temporary return
I wondered if i was going to go back Japan in end of August、because my boyfriend who lives in Japan wants to see me and our anniversary coming up in August. He has come Australia for my birthday. I think it's my turn.
So i send a message to my Family, but my sister said to me "why you are going to come here? You should enjoy and spend time and money in Australia instead of japan. You must come back in 7months if you don't want to do." And I had my mother worriy about me because she thought I was in under pressures although I'm fine.
Then, I think me sister's opinion is right. So, I dicided to not go japan at the time.
May be my boyfriend and me will meet here again or meet halfway.
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Temporary return
I wondered if i was I will be (future tense) going to go back Japan in at the end of August, because my boyfriend who lives in Japan wants to see me and our anniversary coming up in August. He has come came to Australia for my birthday. I think it's my turn.So i I send sent (past tense) a message to my Ffamily, but my sister said to me "wWhy you are going to come here? You should enjoy yourself, and spend more time and money in Australia instead of jJapan. You must come back in 7 months anyway [1] if you don't want to do." And I had my mother worriy worries about me, because she thought I was in under pressures, although I'm fine.
Then, I think me sister's opinion is right. So, I diecided I will to not go japan at the this time.
May be my boyfriend and me I [2] will meet here again or meet halfway.
= Not wrong, but more native/natural sounding
[1] This depends on what you mean to say. I thought you mean something like, "you are scheduled to come back to Japan in 7 months. Since you will have to come back then, you should not come back now and instead spend more time there".
[2] Lots of native English speakers even get this wrong often. To choose whether it should be "I" or "me" take away "my boyfriend and" and the sentence becomes "Maybe I/me will...". Here "I" would be correct, so "Maybe my boyfriend and I will..." is correct.
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